Week 2 of the Autumn Equinox: #TankaTuesday

This is week two of The Autumn Equinox (September 22 – October 7) Shubun 秋分 for Colleen Chesebro’s new #TankaTuesday challenge based on the 24 Japanese seasons.

My kigo (season) word is Homecoming as in high school and college Homecoming events. This is one I have made up, but for me it represents mid-Autumn, the Autumn Equinox. I have a second kigo for a second poem. I used bonfire because although we had them both summer and fall, the fall ones were the ones that seemed magical, almost mystical.

I wanted to choose a syllabic form that is new to me, and I was intrigued by one that Colleen shared last time.

From the 24 Forms/kouta:

The kouta is a popular Japanese verse form of the Muromachi Period, 14th thru 16th century. They resurrected the lyrical song as a geisha song in the late 1800s and it’s still popular today. Koutas were originally meant to be sung out loud, like many other old forms of poetry. Techniques like assonance and consonance would fit right in with the form, but they aren’t required.

The kouta has several variations, though always short in only 4 lines a 5th line is sometimes is added. Themes reflect ordinary life and often use colloquialisms and onomatopoeia. The most popular are love songs. 

We write kouta in four lines but sometimes five, that tends to celebrate the average person’s everyday life in song. 

Colleen Chesebro

The kouta lines are always an odd number of syllables, usually 5 or 7 mixed, such as 7-5-7-5- or 7-7-7-5.


My son in a new black suit, (7)

daughter in semi-formal, (7)

their dates the first future glimpse. (7)

All are shiny smiles. (5)

Bring on Homecoming! (5)


One year we had a bonfire (7)

post our winning game. (5)

The smell of woodsmoke, night breeze, (7)

the high point before (5)

the descent toward winter. (7)


I looked up toward to see if it is one or two syllables. Two!

blaze bonfire campfire dark
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43 responses to “Week 2 of the Autumn Equinox: #TankaTuesday

  1. Terrific, Luanne

  2. I remember homecomings!

  3. I particularly like the bonfire one!

  4. Kerfe

    This brings to mind how in autumn we burned our leaves at the curb in the street when I was a child. Magical!–but you couldn’t do that now.

  5. I love the bonfire, Luanne! I have to learn about how people take care of the falling leaves here.

  6. So evocative, Luanne. I particularly like the bonfire one. My kids always went to the homecoming dances, but I never went to any games or bonfires that I remember.

  7. Luanne, very well thought-out and executed kouta poems. You bring the scenes to life in them.

  8. Hi Luanne, lovely poetic memories.

  9. This is wonderful! Yes, homecoming is always an autumn affair in America. What a great kigo word. I love both of your poems and agree about the bonfire. In autumn, a bonfire is mystical, as if connecting us to the other realms. Love it, Luanne! 🧡

  10. Gwen M. Plano

    Lovely, Luanne. I had forgotten about Homecoming. How perfect! ❤️

  11. This is lovely a beautiful peak into your Autumn 💜💜

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